"The Ones Who Walk Away From Omelas" by Ursula K LeGuin

Originally Posted 09/18/24

Digital drawing of what looks like an old fashioned postcard that says 'Omelas, not simple folk, just happy! Horse Parades, eh-haa eh-haa, live music, bring the kids!' There is a photo of an old timey family looking like they're going on vacation, with the background being a street intersection. Image originally found here: https://bloodknife.com/omelas-je-taime/ which credits a J.R. Bolt as the creator.

Quick Overview

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This short story is only about 5 pages long, so I definitely recommend reading it! I ended up reading it because of another story I read that references it.

In Depth Review

This whole next section is going to be a summary which involves spoilers. Only read ahead if you don't mind that.

Summary

"The Ones Who Walk Away from Omelas" starts off with the narrator trying to tell you about a parade happening in a perfect city. Almost the entirety of the short story is the narrator trying to convince you how perfect of a city this is. He spends a lot of time trying to get the reader to truly picture the perfect city. Also that everyone there is happy. And not happy with the connotation of simple, or simple minded, or whatever. No, they are just simply, truly, happy because they live in a perfect city. At one point the narrator is trying to list ways in which it might be easier for the reader to picture the perfect city, by describing things that might be in different peoples perfect cities. This quote just sort of cracks me up whenever I see it:

But even granted trains, I fear that Omelas so far strikes some of you as goody-goody. Smiles, bells, parades, horses, bleh. If so, please add an orgy. If an orgy would help, don't hesitate.

I don't know, just always sort of cracks me up how thrown in there it is lmao

The author does spend the last few paragraphs though letting you know one important thing, after you've accepted how perfect the city is. In a locked cellar under one of the houses, with no windows and only a single door going into it, lives a child. Somewhere between 6 and 10 years old. The child can not leave. The child is not clothed, and can not talk to or see anyone. The only interaction it has is when people come to refill its food and water buckets, or to be shown that the child exists. The child used to know the outside world, before one day being put in here.

The narrator says this is the price the people in Omelas pay to live in their perfect world. There must be a child in that room at all time, suffering. Should someone rescue the child, their perfect city would instantly crumble. And so, the child must suffer, for the good of the many. Most people eventually accept this reality, but others Walk Away.

Thoughts

I like this short story. I think it's an interesting read, and that its messaging is pretty obvious. I've never been great at reading deeply into text, so things that sort of just beat me over the head with it makes my job a lot easier lmao.

Obviously we live in a world with trade offs. Most of us in first world countries have things like computers, phones, cars, etc. It's a pretty commonly known fact that in order for these things to be affordable, workers in other countries are being exploited, in some cases including children. Hell even clothing it's often spoken about how sweatshops exist where workers are barely paid anything at all. And yet we accept this. "Well someone has to make these things and I need clothing, so I guess I just have to accept it".

This story I believe distills that thought process down to its sort of purest and most extreme version - what if an entire city of people could have everything they wanted, be the happiest they could be, but the only drawback was one child suffers immensely. The narrator in the story doesn't really make any judgements on this - just simply mentions this is how it is for the people of Omelas, though some do walk away. I think it's an interesting premise to setup, and I think a lot of people would have a lot of different answers to it.

Wrap Up

I originally read "The Ones Who Walk Away From Omelas" because I read another short story that references it. I'll be talking about that short story in another post, and will link it here once it's done. Overall I think it's a good short story, and I originally became aware of it from Cohost. There's actually a bunch of memes about the short story I have saved, which I'll share below:

Memes

These are also spoiler-y so proceed at your own risk: A screenshot of a post from Cohost saying 'Imagine, if you will, bells ringing over a city. A perfect, utopian city - whatever that means to you. Can you picture it? The city Omelas?'' with an image from The Twilight Zone I believe. There's then a follow up text and image that says 'Do you accept the festival, the city, the joy? It's hard, isn't it? Well, what if there was one more thing I hadn't told you yet'. I don't know exactly what show this is from A screenshot of a post from Cohost user silasoftrees saying 'No way to prevent this' says only city with omelas hole.' It then goes on to say 'OMELAS- In the days following the Festival of Summer in which several people silently turned and left the gates, citizens living in the only city with an Omelas hole reportedly concluded Tuesday that there was no way to fix the situation. 'This was a terrible tragedy, but sometimes these things just happen and there's nothing anyone can do to stop them,' said Omelas resident Shevek Anarresti, echoing sentiments expressed by tens of thousands of individuals who reside in a metropolis where a kid is kept forever in a torture pit and whose citizens are 20 times more likely to abruptly leave their homes and livelihoods for an unimaginable future than other developed city-states. 'It's a shame, but what can we do? There really wasn't anything that would keep everyone happy aside from the heart-rending immiseration of a child.' At press time, residents of the only economically advanced city in the world with a child-pain-based utilitarian 'one weird trick to utopia' were referring to themselves and their situation as 'helpless'. A screenshot of a post from Cohost user matthewseiji saying 'Hate to be the guy to say it, but when I first heard about Cohost I turned to my wife and said 'They gotta have an Omelas kid, or they're fucked.' If thirty years of high-stakes tech entrepreneurship taught me anything, it's this: you have to cause unlimited suffering in order to make a viable website. And for the record, no, I don't like it either, but you can't just ignore how the world works and coast on hopes and dreams, can you? Most of my startup consults these days, they show me a plan for technology, staffing, roadmap or whatever, but I don't see an Omelas plan. Some of them don't even know what that is, which is crazy, hello, it's 2024... so I go over the basics with them: WHO will be your Omelas kid? HOW much will they suffer? WHAT will you do about the ones who walk awy from your platform/ service? And DON'T say write a story about them, that's not good enough A screenshot of a post from Cohost user Cacklemancy saying 'If omelas were really true to life they would keep adding more children to the suffering pit to increase the Utopia-ness. If this much is worth one child's suffering to all these poeople just imagine how much cooler this could be running on the pain of 100 children! How far can we take this, that's what the shareholders want to know A screenshot of a post from Cohost user jinglebellrockstar saying 'she on my omelas till i put kids in her hole. is this anything? A screenshot of a post from Cohost user pinewarbler saying 'HEARTWARMING: This Tech Entrepreneur is Teaching the Omelas Child to Code Screenshot of a post from Cohost that shows a thumbnail as if it's a Tom Scott video from Youtube and the thumbnail says 'you won't believe its one atrocity'. Another user follows it up with 'I'm standing at the gates of the city of Omelas. For years now, people have been arguing about the morality of this city's utterly unique infrastructural setup. Now, I'm not going to get into that debate just yet - but stuck around, we *will* get there. First, I'm going to be getting a tour of the city - which, as you probably know, is famous for being an allegedly perfect utopia made possible, inexplicably, by the unspeakable suffering of one small child... *and I'm going to meet him*. It is then followed again with a user saying So that's that! Thank you once again to my hosts and guides, and to the suffering child for the opportunity to speak with him. Let me know your thoughts about this place in the comments. Do try to be polite about it. But  as for me? It's time to walk away. [thirty seconds of crunching footsteps moving away from the fixed camera] A screenshot of a post from Cohost user RoyalAssasin which says 'You don't hate Mondays. You hate that fucking kid in the cellar